Free Write#2
It was a dark and stormy night in Perry. My parents where going out to dinner while i was getting baby set by one of my mom's best friends daughter. We were watching a movie when we heard a noise in the basement. I told my babysitter to go see and she told me i should go with her but we were both frightened. We decided that it was probably my cat making that noise in the basement. But than we heard a knock at the door. My babysitter told me she was going to answer it just in case something happens. She opened the door and there was a soft scream and a loud slam at the door. That really startled me and I was really scared. I went to look what had happened and when i came there my babysitter was gone and the vase by the door was broken in pieces. I was about to cry but told my self that I should stay calm and call the police. I dialed 911 in panic. I told the police what had happened and they said to lock all doors and they will be right there. They knocked the door bell 5 minutes later. They wanted me to tell them what had happened again so they could write a police report. The police started to search around for some clues but found nothing except the broken vase. My parents came rushing in to the house to see why police cars where there. I told them the story and they couldn't believe it and were glad I was okay. They have been searching for the past 24 hours and found nothing. But one night we got a knock on the door who is a police officer picked the note up. The note said Hello, I wouldn’and there was a note my brothert search for your little friend because you will never find her and when you do it will be too late and you will never find me. It had been a week and we finally came upon a deserted storage house it sounded like some was in there because there was a terrible scream. The police came quickly and surrounded the place. When the police came people were walking around and an old lady bumped into me. She had wrinkled face and had a cape on. When she bumped into me a the same writing on the note we got dropped from her cape. I told the police and they quickly went after her and she started to run. They finally got her at sent her to prison. They checked the storage but didn’t find any trace of my babysitter. They caught the lady but my babysitter was never found. And yet why the lady kidnapped her.
Tuesday, October 28, 2008
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6 comments:
This is a really good story!!! Way to go girl!
Bethany
good story spela. Good Job
Hey spela great story!!!
Spela- Very VERY creative but you have a few inconsistenies. The beginning of the orange paragraph also confuses me a bit. Overall, nicely done. +9
spela i loved your story it was so intersting.
Is this a true story
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